Big trouble in little india

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Ts ilock.

Fucking Brilliant Write Up. This can be a blockbuster movie.

It can be a movie. The last part on Gwen was heart wrenching and touching at the same time.

[lowhc]

It is realistic to have GoT where good people die rather than LotR where everything ends well.

The usual high quality of Ilock, and story is better than those before. Cool stuff.

[JizFries]

RIP Gwen!! May u live a happier life up there with your sis..

[diputs1269]

Tks for the very well written-up here, more please.

[AboveAll88]

well i guess bro ilock has his reasons for killing gwen.. but i just cant... cant help but feel so sad.. especially when jeff opened the door and realised that he was too late

[decepticon73]

Welcome back bro ilock, lucky still 22 not too far to read

[keano]

Originally Posted by ilikeoldchangke

Thank you for all the comments.

Some parts are hard to read, those parts are hard to write and edit as well.

The emotional roller coaster is part of the fun isn't it. To forget the daily grind and just immerse yourself in another world.

To kill a character is not an easy decision, not when i had to build it up from scratch. It's like baking a nice cake knowing it's going to be eaten and passed out into the toilet.

I like Gwen, i was deliberating her fate during early development, there were alternatives but i felt it's better to let her go. Wasn't expecting that big a reaction.


I don't want go into detail for the rest of my work but many more characters will not see the ending.

Gwen's part is touching, i teared when i wrote it, but there's another part i literally broke like a dam. It's really painful to write it, to paint that parting scene, and i think it's going to be very painful to read it as well.


Thank you for reading my work and for leaving a comment.


Please accept my apologies for being unable to reply to everyone.
Drop me a PM or a mail anytime.

Cheers

James

((Gwen's part is touching, i teared when i wrote it, but there's another part i literally broke like a dam. It's really painful to write it, to paint that parting scene, and i think it's going to be very painful to read it as well.))

Which part is it?

[greyjade]

Excellent story TS, thanks a million!!

[shinozuke]

OMG, u mean to say that the emotional torture on Gwen’s part is just the tip of the iceberg?!?!

I can’t wait to read that part man. Probably I need to read that part alone with a packet of tissue prepared hahaha.

[soundrel]

A big fan of your story, support!!

[FlatTop]

Still can't accept that Gwen was killed by those demons. Waiting for next updates.

[CameIntoContact]

Very good story, support and camping!

[Sigg4]

I loved bro ilick stories, Edward fernanda chan is the bodyguard stories than the clement working place I think is the facility I work in that stories I think all the stories are linked. Good job bro ilock.

[AX1206]

Great Story! Cant wait for next part!

[Tai_zi21]

Any update for a lazy Monday my fav writer?